Sunday, June 24, 2012

10 words

My mom picked 10 words and I wrote a story with them.  The words that we used are highlighted in red.  Maybe you can write a story with these 10 words too!

Once there was a chicken, his name was Charlie.  Charlie was always happy.  His neighbor, Mr. Monkey was as cool as a monkey can be.  They were really good friends.  They would go on all sorts of adventures.  Once, they even went under the sea!

Today they were going in the jungle to find a new friend.  Their mission planner, Mr. Smurf said that he would come along and he brought a lot of supplies with him.  charlie and Mr. Monkey asked Mr. Smurf why he was bring so much equipment.  Mr. Smurf said that he thought that he would need it in case they ran into something strange.  But the funny thing is that Mr. Smurf was wearing a jetpack.  So Charlie asked him why he was wearing a jetpack.  Mr. Smurf said "let's just get on with the adventure because this is my first adventure with you guys."  so they went to the Shoebox Jungle.  It is called the Shoebox Jungle because people who have once gone there have seen a monster and you have to give the monster a shoebox for him to leave you alone.

They started into the jungle and saw a lot of strange plants.  What they also saw was a lot of strange bugs and animals.  They had never seen so many strange things in one spot before.  When they got to the middle of the jungle, there was a big hole.  So they looked down into the hole and they saw the Shoebox Monster.  So they carefully gave the monster a shoebox, but what they didn't know was that the monster was sad and the monster needed a friend.  So they cheered up the monster by playing with him.  They had a really fun time with the monster and they had a big friend.  

When they got out of the jungle they met a mouse that was scaring an elephant.  When the mouse was done scaring the elephant, the mouse said "hi, my name is Morrison the Mouse."  And they had a new friend so they introduced the Shoebox Monster to Morrison the Mouse.  Morrison never thought that he would ever see the Shoebox Monster, but now he had him as a friend.  So they took their new friends on all the other adventures they went on.

7 comments:

  1. Dude! You did it!!! I love this story... I'm going to have to work on a new list for you; clearly that list was too easy! Lalu.

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  2. Wow! That is a really geat story! Maybe you would like a game I learned called shared story writing. It is when you all start with the same line.
    ex. Bob was feeling sad as he went to work
    then you each make another line. You cover up the line before you and pass it around. You keep going untill you have you same story back. Then you share them out! Maybe you can try my game, and I could try yours!

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  3. What a GREAT story! I hope you will write one when we are together. I can hardly wait!
    NANA

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    1. Can you put together a list of 10 words? The words can be like "possible" or "patriotic".

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  4. love the shoebox monster story. that's great work, ryko!

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    1. The Shoebox Monster was in a show that I watched. The show was called Flapjack. But on the show it doesn't really take shoeboxes from people.

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